In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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like
USA
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the USA
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and other countries it is
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trend
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house
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a house
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rather than buy
it
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. The main reason behind
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case is
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megation
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migration
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of people from one
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to another
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. I think
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is a positive situation. There are so many benefits of renting a
house
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. If a person is living in a rented
apartment
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than
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then
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if he or she
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wants
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can go to another
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. For poor for
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public
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it
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easy to rent a building.
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, if a group is living in a country like
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the USA
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for work
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purpose
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their
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work change from one
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to another
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if they have a rented
house
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it become easy for them in
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types
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of
sitution
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situation
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so many benefits the government should support
a
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public because it is helpful for
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apply
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developing a nation because
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fast and easy. There are some negative
effect
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effects
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of renting a building. If
a
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the
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public
want
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wants
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to live
at
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in
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one
place
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it is better to buy a
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building
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than
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then
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renting
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rent
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it. Some public feel unsafe
in
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apply
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renting
a
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an
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apartment
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buying it. If a poor public
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wants
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to buy
a
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an
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apartment
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then
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the government should support them.
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, if a person
who is
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has been
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living in
new york
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New York
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since her childhood and
want
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to live
for
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long
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a long
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then
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buying
that
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apply
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is
better
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a better
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option
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then
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than
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renting.
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, the government should support those public who want to buy
a
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an
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apartment
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.
To conclude
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, as every coin
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two sides in
same
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the same
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ways renting
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house
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a house
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rather
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then
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than
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buying
have
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one has
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also
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two sides positive
as well as
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negative. I think
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is
positive
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a positive
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situation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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