In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Countries
like Change preposition
In countries
USA
and other countries it is Correct article usage
the USA
an
trend Change the article
a
of renting
Change preposition
to rent
house
rather than buy Add an article
a house
it
. The main reason behind Correct pronoun usage
one
this
case is Correct article usage
the megation
megation
of people from one Correct your spelling
migration
negation
place
to another place
. I think this
is a positive situation.
There are so many benefits of renting a house
. If a person is living in a rented apartment
than
if he or she Correct your spelling
then
want
change Correct subject-verb agreement
wants
than
can go to another Correct your spelling
then
place
. For poor for a
poor Correct article usage
the
public
it Add a comma
,public
become
easy to rent a building. Change the verb form
becomes
For example
, if a group is living in a country like USA
for work Correct article usage
the USA
perpose
and if Correct your spelling
purpose
purposes
there
work change from one Correct your spelling
their
place
to another place
then
if they have a rented house
then
it become easy for them in this
types
of Fix the agreement mistake
type
sitution
. Correct your spelling
situation
situations
Thus
, as it have
so many benefits the government should support Change the verb form
has
a
public because it is helpful for Correct article usage
the
the
developing a nation because Correct article usage
apply
its
fast and easy.
There are some negative Replace the word
it's
it is
effect
of renting a building. If Fix the agreement mistake
effects
a
public Correct article usage
the
want
to live Correct subject-verb agreement
wants
at
one Change preposition
in
place
then
it is better to buy a buliding
Correct your spelling
building
Correct your spelling
than
then
renting
it. Some public feel unsafe Wrong verb form
rent
in
renting Change preposition
apply
a
Change the article
an
apartment
then
buying it. If a poor public Replace the word
than
want
to buy Change the verb form
wants
a
Change the article
an
apartment
then
the government should support them. For example
, if a person who is
living in Wrong verb form
has been
new york
since her childhood and Correct your spelling
New York
want
to live Change the verb form
wants
for
Rephrase
there for
long
Correct article usage
a long
then
buying that
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
better
option Add an article
a better
then
renting. Correct your spelling
than
However
, the government should support those public who want to buy a
Change the article
an
apartment
.
To conclude
, as every coin have
two sides in Correct subject-verb agreement
has
same
ways renting Correct article usage
the same
house
rather Add an article
a house
then
buying Replace the word
than
have
Wrong verb form
one has
also
two sides positive as well as
negative. I think this
is positive
situation.Add an article
a positive
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