The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now

The map below shows changes to a park in 1980 and now
The above map illustrates how a park has been changed from 1980 up to the present day.
Overall
, since 1980,
this
recreational area has undergone significant improvement with additional facilities for outdoor eating, sitting and playing. In 1980, there were only two gates, one from the left above the pond and the second one at the bottom between two flower beds.
However
, both gates
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been removed and the roads have become narrow and curved in order to accommodate more facilities. Two new roads are built from the top and the right of the map respectively, sectioning off the top-right corner.
Moreover
, some of the trees at the top right
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been cut down, being replaced by chairs, desks and barbecue. There have been no changes to the pond,
although
it is surrounded by more benches.
Lastly
, the flowerbed at the bottom left has turned into a bush
while
the second one across the road has been replaced by a playground for children.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformed
  • expanded
  • renovated
  • upgraded
  • revamped
  • refurbished
  • install
  • addition
  • increase
  • enhance
  • improve
  • introduce
  • upgrade
  • create
  • development
  • facilities
  • recreational areas
  • wildlife habitats
  • pathways
  • walkways
  • seating areas
  • lighting arrangements
  • ponds
  • lakes
  • sports facilities
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