Increasingly, many governments around the world are cchosing to provide greater funding for scientific and technological development rather than investing in art and culture.

Science

and

technology

have been improving speedily in

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world. The majority of

governments

are specifying a huge amount of budget for scientific and technological improvements

opposed

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to the

art

and culture;

although

, in my

opinion

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pattern could be a negative trend all over the country. Obviously, there is a clear requirement to progress

science

and

technology

in every society. As the world is offended by modernity,

increasingly

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, progress in

science

and

technology

assist

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individuals to adapt

with

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this

offensive arrangement.

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, in medicine novel diseases need new treatments and modern equipment, which could be provided through related knowledge of

science

and

technology

, so undoubtedly these developments are considered as a positive one. At the same time, progression in

art

and culture is

also

vital for

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as well as

governments

. Because

art

and cultural projects keep alive various heritages as a collection of global customs, it is significantly valuable to be funded.

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, there are a huge number of museums and exhibitions in every country, which represent the value and beauty of those countries.

Although

,

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significance has

forgotten

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at present days,

still

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the advantages of

art

and cultural projects

remind

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their high valuableness to

governments

.

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, giving

budget

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for

art

and cultural projects

provide

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career opportunities for

young

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generation. Because there are many skilled teenagers who are eager to be an artist in

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society, they require attention and

fund

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from

governments

;

however

, these young people could continue

to

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their path, it is more important to keep them motivated and inspired,

for example

with prizes and scholarships.

Therefore

, the

cautions

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must be taken about

art

and cultural programs. In conclusion,

art

and culture improvements are more valuable in a society alongside

with

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science

and technological trends. I think

this

onside development could be harmful

for

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the future of

world

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.