You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example, diet).

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to ask for

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itinerary

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courses. I am

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to study at a school overseas. I am hoping you

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provide me with some information. First of all, I have read your advertisement on the internet. One of the things I like is that I have a choice.

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, the room is bright and moderately wide,

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is comfortable for doing my homework. I would be grateful if it

located

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near the school. I would be interested

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you could tell me what the price is.

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, there are no more than four flatmates. I am hoping that you

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be able to assist us and provide us with suitable accommodation to enjoy studying. You can contact me on my mobile phone number which is: 3333845 I look forward to receiving a prompt reply! Yours faithfully Malikova Sevinch

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

148 words

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You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example, diet).

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What could be the reasons behind this? What measures can be taken to resolve this problem?

There are certain countries where students stay with their families while pursuing higher education, whereas in other countries, they prefer attending universities in different cities. What's your take on whether the benefits of living away from home during college outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?