The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The graph below illustrates the value of trash made by three companies from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, it's easy to see that companies a and b decreased the amount of garbage they had produced.
In
contrast
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waste
amount of
company
c has been growing all over the years. In the year 2000
company
A was producing about 12 tons of
waste
and all over the given period their numbers gradually declined to about 8 tons in 2015. For the first five years
company
B grew its volume of
waste
, but
then
the level of
waste
significantly dropped more than 3 times from over 9
tonnes
per year in 2005 to 3
tonnes
in 2015.
Company
C started with little more than 3
tonnes
in 2000
,
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and showed an upward trend through the years. In 2015 their amount of garbage was over 9
tonnes
and exceeded
a
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the
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waste
volume of two other companies.
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