The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph below illustrates the value of trash made by three companies from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, it's easy to see that companies a and b decreased the amount of garbage they had produced. In
contrast
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,contrast
waste
amount of company
c has been growing all over the years.
In the year 2000 company
A was producing about 12 tons of waste
and all over the given period their numbers gradually declined to about 8 tons in 2015. For the first five years company
B grew its volume of waste
, but then
the level of waste
significantly dropped more than 3 times from over 9 tonnes
per year in 2005 to 3 tonnes
in 2015.
Company
C started with little more than 3 tonnes
in 2000,
and showed an upward trend through the years. In 2015 their amount of garbage was over 9 Remove the comma
apply
tonnes
and exceeded a
Correct article usage
the
waste
volume of two other companies.Submitted by cryptofarmboy on
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