You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital. Write a letter to your teammate. In your letter • • • say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up

Dear Alex, I hope you are doing well. I was so worried when I heard that you

have

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had

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been admitted into hospital

due to

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an injury. It must be very difficult for you

and

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we really hope that you recover soon. How is your treatment going ? Is the hospital authority taking care of you properly ? Have you been to an operation already? I sincerely expect that everything is going perfectly and you are getting the proper rest you need. Everyone in the team misses you a lot,

escpecially

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especially

during our practice sessions. To cheer you up, you should watch the highlights of our football matches

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you can enjoy movies, comedies, or sports live.

This

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will help you to forget about what

had

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happened and keep you motivated to get well soon.

Also

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, once you feel a bit better, we would like to visit you and spend time with you. I am sure that seeing your teammates will definitely

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your mood. Please take good care of yourself

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we are looking forward to seeing you back on the field. Wishing you a speedy recovery. Warm Regards, Keya

kakonchakma.agri

Mar 14, 2026

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task response

For task response: add a little more about your feeling, like shock or sadness, to make your answer more full.

task response

For task response: your ideas answer all parts, but some questions to Alex are not natural. Use warmer and more direct lines.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: your letter is easy to follow, but some linking can be smoother.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: check small word forms and grammar, because a few errors make some parts less clear.

task response

For task response: you answered all three points in the task.

task response

For task response: the tone is kind and caring, which fits a letter to a team friend.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: the letter has a clear opening, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

For coherence and cohesion: each paragraph has one main idea, so it is easy to read.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

190 words

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