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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Studying is the most important thing in everybody's
life
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 Where we can get
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 a big concern.Most people believe that The home is the best place for teaching
children
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 development
on the other hand
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 some think that the
school
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 is the best learning place for
children
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.
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,
this
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 essay will discuss both types of learning for
children
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. The first stage of teaching
children
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 starts from the home.
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, when the baby becomes broad up in the family their learning starts from the family members.
firstly
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 Parents teach their
children
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 how to communicate with others. They teach them good things and take steps to make
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 good.
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,
children
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also
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 learn how family behave do each other and do the same things
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 they learn culture and behaviour from all family members.
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,schooling plays a big role in a student's
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. They meet with new people in
school
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 and make them friends by
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 become a special person.
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, in Japanese ,schools they learn morality through various activities in the
school
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.
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 if a student has done anything wrong
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 the
school
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 punish them with a suitable punishment, and they will never do the same things. On top of that without schooling is not possible to career in
life
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. In conclusion, Despite
children
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 spending more time in
school
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, parents are equally important in teaching them about
life
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 for their own good
life
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. So schooling and family both have their own importance in
children
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's lives for their career.

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • flexible schedule
  • extracurricular activities
  • safe learning environment
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • socialization
  • diversity awareness
  • structured environment
  • discipline
  • punctuality
  • resources and facilities
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  • teamwork
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