In many countries, although people work hard throughout their lives, they still do not have enough money to live comfortably in their retirement. Identify some causes of this retirement issue and suggest possible solutions.

In

this

day and age, the

retirement

problem has been a common reality confronted in a multitude of nations as a fact that many employees or labourers fail to assure themselves a stable pension after

retirement

, regardless of how appreciable their contribution and effort are. There are explicit causes giving rise to the issue and

this

essay aims to discuss them

further

along with

some feasible solutions that could be applied to effectively remedy the problems.

To begin

with, the roots of

this

phenomenon are evidently the lack of righteousness in the labour law and inadequate social welfare. Individuals who devote their whole youth to personal and social benefits may not meet the desired career expectations, as the government,

as well as

organizations,

as well as

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would not radically admit the labourer's effort or offer any incentives to spur the employee's

work

.

As a result

, people are likely to struggle with their lives after leaving a job.

For instance

, many talented employees in Vietnam are assertive enough to opt to

work

abroad, where a better salary and social welfare are provided in conjunction with

retirement

priority, in place of working for a domestic company that hands them a disadvantageous contract.

Furthermore

, a lower-than-expected pension could possibly be caused by the properties of one’s occupation, typically some manual

work

requiring constant

work

to achieve income.

However

,

such

problems could be sufficiently alleviated owing to several remedies.

Firstly

, for the sake of social well-being development reflecting contented individuals, authorized parties should take appropriate action jointly to pass new working policies and laws conducive to the employee and worker's interests during and after their tenure. By using

this

method, firms can

also

create a vigorous working environment and

thus

attract an abundant, high-quality workforce.

In addition

, benefactors around the world could guarantee workers' pensions by establishing funds in order to aid some destitute people after their

retirement

. In conclusion, it is undeniable that

retirement

issues caused by disadvantageous offers for individuals in different occupation fields inflict great hardship on their lives following their retreat from

work

.

Therefore

, the authorized in the

work

market ought to put forward efficient laws and

further

support arduous groups of people with funds.