Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life. Discuss both views.

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that
mathematics
should not be curriculum in schools.
whereas
, others believe it should be taught.
This
essay will examine both views.
To begin
with, some people say that math is not needed anymore because nowadays people use
calculations
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programs
.
In other words
,
mathematics
subjects are useless and
their
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is
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no benefits
of
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studying
such
curriculum
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due to
calculations
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programs
are available.
For instance
, in companies and factories
calculate
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tools are used
instead
of
employees
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mathematics
.
Therefore
, it
seem
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logical that there is no future for
such
subjects.
On the other hand
,
although
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mathematics
programs
are available, some parents believe the subject should be taught and they support their argument that,maths not just a number but it is a
skills
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assist
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in improving the
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memory and critical thinking
due to
when they learn how to solve math question they have to use logic and organise.
Moreover
, it
tought
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taught
the skills of problem -solving
due to
when dealing with
mathematics
their
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is structure to follow as in solving problems.
For example
,
in
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a survey done in 2023 at Sultan Qaboos University showed that 80% of
mathematics
students are excellent
in
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solving problems and they can manage
the
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situations perfectly .
Thus
,
lead to
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math
help
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us in daily life so, it should
be remained
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remain
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in school
programs
. In conclusion, there are two views
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learning
mathematics
at school.
Firstly
, it is not important because it
replaced
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by
computer
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computers
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and calculators.
Secondly
,it is significant and
their
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are
a
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benefits of studying
this
curriculum
such
as improving memory and solving
problems
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skills.
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