The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture diagram illustrates the phases involved in producing
sugar
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from
sugar
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cane plants.
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, there are seven distinct stages of
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process
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which starts with planting
sugar
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canes and culminates in drying and cooling the crystal syrup to form
sugar
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which is ready to be consumed. In the first stage of
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process
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, the
sugar
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cane plants are grown from one to one and a half years before being harvested by farmers and machines. After that,
sugar
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canes are put into a crushing machine where they are pressed hard enough to produce juice.
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, the liquid goes through a limestone filter to eliminate all of the impurities. The
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continues as the purified juice is taken into an evaporator using high temperature to transform the juice into syrup.
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is followed by the use of a centrifuge to separate
sugar
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crystal from syrup before it is left dried and cooled to get the finished product -
sugar
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in the
last
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stage of
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process
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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