The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line graph depicts the number of visitors in the three different areas in a European country from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
it is noticeable that the lakes had a large quantity of people before 2004 when the coast replaced them. However
, the figure for the coast was the area with the highest numbers of public, while
the mountains lowest.
To begin
with the coast, it decreased gradually from 40 in 1987 to 35 in 1992. Therefore
, it rose
progressively to under 70 in the final years and was the area with the biggest quantity of population over the period in question. In terms of the lake, it started to rise from 10 to 40 in 1997 before going up to 75 in 2002. However
, it was declined to under 50 in the final years.
With regards to the mountain, it accounted for over 20 which rose gradually to 30 in 1997 before maintaining the same level. Furthermore
, in the final ,years it increased to 35 and was the place with
the smallest number of the public.Submitted by dimash171206 on
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