the graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line graph depicts the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions in metric
tonnes
per individual human being in the United Kingdom
, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
The average CO2 gas discharge in Portugal and Italy had a significant rise over the period of time, while
the United Kingdom
and Sweden
had shrunk by the year
2007.
In the year
1997, Italy and Portugal had 4 and 1 metric tonnes
of carbon dioxide emissions respectively. Italy experienced a significant rise between 1967-1997 and it attained about 8 metric tonnes
and then
remained steady till the deadline of the period, whereas
Portugal had an upsurge from the beginning to the end and reached near to 6 tonnes
.
However
, the United Kingdom
and Sweden
had 11 and 9 metric tonnes
emissions respectively. The United Kingdom
's Co2 gas release drastically decreased to 9 metric tonnes
but ,still at the end
of the time it had the highest gas emission while
Sweden
had an upsurge during the year
1967-1977 it had made approximately 11 metric tonnes
and from the year
1977-2007 it has sharply fallen to 5 metric tonnes
. By the end of the ,
period Remove the comma
apply
Sweden
has less carbon dioxide emission per person.Submitted by sreyakaruturi on
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