Some people think that government should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that artists should be helped by alternative sources such as people, NGOs and Universitirs. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Art represents the

culture

and history of a nation and talented artists should be helped

finnacially

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financially

. Few individuals

believes

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that it is

government's

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the government's

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responsibility

while

other think that

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, educational

institues

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institutes

and

wellfare socities

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welfare societies

should provide

this

support. I believe

this

is a collaborative responsibility of

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and other institutions. On the one hand, I believe

government

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is responsible for

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the maintainance

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maintainance

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maintenance

of traditional and cultural

aspacts

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aspects

of a country. So many creative painters

,

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and musicians are maintaining

this

culture

through their creative

art work

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artwork

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and folk music.

Thus

, official authorities should support these talented people with money, which will motivate them to continue with their prestigious work. In

this

way, they can enhance their skills and through their skilled work can grow and lighten

thier

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their

culture

and history to the world.

On the other hand

, non-profit organizations,

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and universities can raise funds for valued artists.

This

will help the

government

to lower the financial burden and spend more money on other public services

such

as medical care and educational facilities.

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will

also

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the

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culture

of help among

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society and students. In conclusion, artists should be helped financially to motivate and enhance

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culture

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awareness.

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is a shared duty of individuals, NGOs,

educational

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the educational

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sector and

government

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the government

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.