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The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
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 of
magazines
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 sold per
person
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 doesn't follow a similar trend in the five
countries
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 mentioned in the graph. Anticipated sales for the
year
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 2007 were
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 given in the graph which explains to us what the future numbers might hold for the
number
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 of
magazines
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 sold per
person
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. The first and most important observation is that the
number
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 of
magazines
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 sold in
countries
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 A, B, and C reduced in the
year
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 2005 compared to 2003. One observation in these three bar graphs is the value for projected sales even dropped down as we go to 2007.
This
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 shows that the
number
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 of
magazines
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 sold per
person
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 seems to be continuing the trend of falling over the years.
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, The value is vice-versa in
Countries
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 D and E from 2003 to 2005. The
number
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 of
magazines
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 sold per
person
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 in these
countries
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 has shown a positive impact.
This
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 trend is expected to stay with country D for the
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 2007 too.
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,
this
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 is not the case with country E where the estimated sales for the
year
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 seem to be coming down closer to the
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 in 2003. Another noteworthy observation is that
countries
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 A, B, and C have shown a higher
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 of
magazines
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 sold per
person
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 compared to the other two
countries
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 even after the drop-down during the period. The increased numbers in
countries
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 D and E for the years couldn't make up for the numbers shown by A, B, and C.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, magazines, person, countries, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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