The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday
The presented bar graph shows the holiday leisure activities among
Chinese
, American,
Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
and compares it with the number of
hours
they spent
while
on vacation in August 2019. The tasks include being at the beach, reading books and visiting places in Greece.
Overall
,
Chinese
tourists
had the greatest number of
hours
when it comes to reading books
while
Turkish
and Brazilian
tourists
both had the least
hours
.
Chinese
are less likely to go to the beach and visit places. Americans and
Turkish
visitors had a close number of
hours
for all three leisure
actions
Replace the word
activities
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. In detail,
Chinese
tourists
spent 8
hours
reading books
while
Turkish
and Brazilian people spent half of that time doing the same activity. For three
hours
, Americans and
Turkish
people toured places around Greece. Most vacationers from Brazil stay at the beach for 6
hours
, followed by
Turkish
travelers
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travellers
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passing time there for 5
hours
.
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