The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday
The presented bar graph shows the holiday leisure activities among
Chinese
, American, Turkish
and Brazilian tourists
and compares it with the number of hours
they spent while
on vacation in August 2019. The tasks include being at the beach, reading books and visiting places in Greece.
Overall
, Chinese
tourists
had the greatest number of hours
when it comes to reading books while
Turkish
and Brazilian tourists
both had the least hours
. Chinese
are less likely to go to the beach and visit places. Americans and Turkish
visitors had a close number of hours
for all three leisure actions
.
In detail, Replace the word
activities
Chinese
tourists
spent 8 hours
reading books while
Turkish
and Brazilian people spent half of that time doing the same activity. For three hours
, Americans and Turkish
people toured places around Greece. Most vacationers from Brazil stay at the beach for 6 hours
, followed by Turkish
travelers
passing time there for 5 Change the spelling
travellers
hours
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