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Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion.

#people #history #two
According to
 myriad documentary news, movies and articles, Studying
history
 has been being fascinating topic for centuries. There is a popular
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 in our nationality "If you don't know your
history
, you are
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 as
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losing
 monkey in the forest". Our past creates our present and future;
thus
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 completely that
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past
history
 could help us better understand the present. It gives us
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many opportunities to
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develop
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such
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 science and daily life and it makes our lives more interesting.
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 ancient people
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us
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fire
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 is the main factor of our needs. The
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 wonderer is still human best wishes to see.The feat of
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studying
history
 is countless. Ancient people give us the structure of country,
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, and family. They discovered many places, invented a large number of technologies and left them
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. They
makes
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 our lives easier. People, who think
history
 has nothing or little to tell us, have their own
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explanation
explanations
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 that
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topic
. I have no chance to
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judge
 them.
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Everything
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two
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 sides. Maybe adolescents are more
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interested
uninterested
 in
history
. Because in
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, their life is busy and they have no time to consider about it.
Finally
, We have our babies read about our histories more. If we could do it, it'll
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bring
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 up our child in
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 hand
instead
 of us.
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