Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

this

Linking Words

modern era, countries are possibly maintaining hygiene and economic status. Some believe that it is sustainable and others disagree. I strongly believe that the country can make it without damaging the environment. Though,

this

Linking Words

essay is going to discuss both views elaborately and provide my opinion

at the end

Linking Words

. On one hand, many regions in the world are struggling to protect our surroundings. The government ought to implement some vital policies to control

this

Linking Words

issue.

For example

Linking Words

, big industries, most of them destroying the forest and building

modem

Correct your spelling

modern

show examples

companies. Through

this

Linking Words

, the

constitution

Capitalize word

Constitution

show examples

earns more money and grows our nation's economy.

Moreover

Linking Words

, the government should penalize them and stop

this

Linking Words

kind of money-making.

Therefore

Linking Words

, it will reduce the rate of damage to our surroundings and

get

Verb problem

apply

show examples

benefits

Correct subject-verb agreement

benefit

show examples

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the country's growth.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, some think that it will be hard to manage the nation's well-being without destroying the forest.

In addition

Linking Words

, they opine that economic status is the main priority for the region rather than

Correct article usage

the preventions

show examples

preventions

Fix the agreement mistake

prevention

show examples

of nature.

For instance

Linking Words

, water bores and petrol. It is very essential for society's convenience.

Thus

Linking Words

, they can get profits from soil import and export among trade even helps to earn more money and saves the society financially.

To conclude

Linking Words

although

Linking Words

it is workable for the nation to achieve both financial growth and

taking

Wrong verb form

take

show examples

care of nature even though it has a few drawbacks. In my opinion, it is undoubtedly true that a country

both

Add a missing verb

is both

show examples

economically successful and has a clean environment with cooperation of rules and regulations.

Submitted by katrvn.subramaniyan on Fri Sep 15 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

11
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

258 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views on whether college students should spend all their time on compulsory lessons. While obtaining a qualification is a predominate work for undergraduates, I still believe students should be allowed to choose some extracurricular courses considering their future developments.
4
band
WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
All animals are so crucial for human life. Since animals have many benefits for us. To illustrate cows make milk, chickens give eggs, bees produce honey etc. Therefore, we should care for and protect whole animals. Otherwise, we can encounter certain problems. These are malnutrition, distrust of streets and pollution etc.
5.5
band
Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case ? What can be done to attract more local people ?
Today, many places, especially museum and historical sites, face a problem with visitors which attract more tourists rather than local people. This essay will try to identify the factors contributing to this problem and also put a solutions towards that.
4.5
band
Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places.
Although many parents think that growing up their children in the city could benefit their modern lifestyle and will give more accessible facilities than in the countryside, some parents also decided to let their children grown up in the countryside. Therefore, there are advantages and disadvantages for parents to decide where the children should live and spend their development period.
5
band
Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Film production in the past was known to be an expensive affair, which only the big companies could afford. In recent times, the advancements in the tecnological sector have resulted in making it possible for individuals to release movies independently at low costs. In my opinion, this benefits both society on the whole, as a wider variety of views can be put forward, and individuals belonging to economically weaker sections by providing equal opportunities to them.

Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case ? What can be done to attract more local people ?

Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places.

Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?