The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.
The flow chart provides a comprehensive overview of how to manufacture ceramic
pots
.
Overall
, there are three main stages of producing ceramics
Change the noun form
ceramic
pots
. Begin with preparation
of Add an article
the preparation
clay
, production, and finally
colouring are
displayed in the process.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
To begin
with, In preparation
stage, Add an article
the preparation
clay
as raw materials are picked by excavator
and moved to the Correct article usage
the excavator
plan
by truck. Correct your spelling
plane
Subsequently
, clay
is crushed by two parallel process
into small pieces. The next process is to Change to a plural noun
processes
mixed
the crushed feed with Change the verb
mix
additional
ingredient, water in the cylinder thing. The output product of Add an article
an additional
mixer
Correct article usage
the mixer
then
is moulded at
the specific box and dried Change preposition
in
around
4-8 hours.
Change preposition
for around
Finally
, the clay
is assembled from the mould box to make way
Add an article
the way
a way
Change preposition
for
of
the heating of Change preposition
for
clay
pots
in Correct article usage
an oven
oven
with Correct article usage
an oven
Correct article usage
a specific
specific
temperature accounted for 1000 Correct article usage
a specific
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celcius
. Dried Correct your spelling
celsius
clay
pots
is
coloured Change the verb form
are
by
blue paint and fired in the box before they are ready to distribute to outlets.Change preposition
with
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