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to Compare and Contrast Online Learning & Classroom learning

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Nowadays, There are many types of learning styles
such
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school
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classroom
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classrooms
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, online
course
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 etc. Some people consider that learning online can replace the
school
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classroom
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 because we can understand the content and
it s
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it's
 easy to
study
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.
However
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, I don't agree with
this
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 idea In my opinion, The
school
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classroom
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 has many benefits in learning, As you know, you go to
school
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. You meet
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teacher
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the teacher
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 and your classmates. The
teacher
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 teaches us in their own way and has some exercises for us to make sure that we understand the subjects. For
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, you
study
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 how to play the music by the guitar. The
teacher
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 play first and teach how to play and read the note,
then
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 you play after the
teacher
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. If you don't understand, you can ask the
teacher
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 in
class
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.
Moreover
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,
teaching
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by teaching
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 in
class
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 has your classmates, you can discuss
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the learning contents, exercises,
homework
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and homework
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 with your friends. It can develop your social
skills
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 and update your knowledge with your friends. After the
class
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, you can go
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to hang
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 out with your friends.
On the contrary
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, Learning online
also
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advantages in learning. It can save
your
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you
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times
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time
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 and money in other ways. If you take the online course, you can
study
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 anywhere and
any
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at any
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times
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time
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 when you are free. You can
study
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cafes
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. You can
study
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 on your weekends. Online courses can help you
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 money
such
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 as travel expenses,
food
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and food
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 costs.
Although
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,
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 learning online has advantages, there
has
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the disadvantages.
First,
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If you don't understand in
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, you have to ask the questions
in
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 the board and wait for the answer. It is not sure that you will understand the answers.
Second,
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online courses cannot
practice
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 some
skills
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for
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you
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such
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 as cooking, playing
the
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music, inventing robots etc.
Third,
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some
skills
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 have to
practice
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 in
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the team
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 and online cannot
practice
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 that skill for you.
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 instance, you have to play the songs in music bands. In conclusion, I think the
school
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classroom
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 is better than the online
class
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. It can make sure that you understand the learning contents and
practices
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practice
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skill
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 that you cannot do
by
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 your own.
Although
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online
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an online
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classroom
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 can save
your
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you
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 time and money, it cannot teach some
skills
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 and you cannot ask
the
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questions to the
teacher
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. I wonder
that
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if
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 the
school
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classroom
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study
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 more
efficient
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efficiently
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 than learning online.
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