to Compare and Contrast Online Learning & Classroom learning

Nowadays, There are many types of learning styles
such
as group studying,
school
classroom
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classrooms
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, online
course
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etc. Some people consider that learning online can replace the
school
classroom
because we can understand the content and
it s
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it's
easy to
study
.
However
, I don't agree with
this
idea In my opinion, The
school
classroom
has many benefits in learning, As you know, you go to
school
. You meet
teacher
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and your classmates. The
teacher
teaches us in their own way and has some exercises for us to make sure that we understand the subjects. For
examples
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, you
study
how to play the music by the guitar. The
teacher
play first and teach how to play and read the note,
then
you play after the
teacher
. If you don't understand, you can ask the
teacher
in
class
.
Moreover
,
teaching
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in
class
has your classmates, you can discuss
about
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the learning contents, exercises,
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and homework
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with your friends. It can develop your social
skills
and update your knowledge with your friends. After the
class
, you can go
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out with your friends.
On the contrary
, Learning online
also
has
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advantages in learning. It can save
your
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times
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and money in other ways. If you take the online course, you can
study
anywhere and
any
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times
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time
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when you are free. You can
study
the courses after work at home or internet
cafes
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. You can
study
on your weekends. Online courses can help you
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money
such
as travel expenses,
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costs.
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learning online has advantages, there
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the disadvantages.
First,
If you don't understand in
class
, you have to ask the questions
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the board and wait for the answer. It is not sure that you will understand the answers.
Second,
online courses cannot
practice
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some
skills
for
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you
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such
as cooking, playing
the
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music, inventing robots etc.
Third,
some
skills
have to
practice
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in
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and online cannot
practice
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that skill for you.
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instance, you have to play the songs in music bands. In conclusion, I think the
school
classroom
is better than the online
class
. It can make sure that you understand the learning contents and
practices
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skill
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that you cannot do
by
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your own.
Although
online
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classroom
can save
your
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time and money, it cannot teach some
skills
and you cannot ask
the
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questions to the
teacher
. I wonder
that
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the
school
classroom
can make you
study
more
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than learning online.
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