You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter •say which part-time course you booked •explain about booking a different course •ask about booking a different course

#course #college #administrator #•say #•explain #•ask

Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of your students who sought admission to your college for the short-term

course

, a few weeks back. I am writing in regard to the cancellation of the slot, which I have chosen to step into. I have been passionate about painting since 6 years old. As an impact , I was admitted into art classes, Especially, what inspires me is that the faculty will be training students to perform strokes with oil paints at basic to expertise levels. Unfortunately, I am reluctant to take up

this

course

at present. A few days ago, a job was offered by a company,

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they advised me on some prerequisites , Particularly, Computer skills were asked as prime skills. In my present situation, my Job is crucial to my survival and well-being. So, I prefer to flip to another

course

. Certainly, I would be pleased to register for another temporary

course

. At present, I am soliciting for technical skills

course

. I would really appreciate it if you could change my

course

type. Looking forward to your response towards my concern. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Anu

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Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to inform you
I recently booked a part-time course
unfortunately, I won't be able to attend
due to unforeseen circumstances
regretfully cancel my booking
I would like to inquire about
availability of a different course
alternative course options
similar course that better suits my needs
kindly provide information regarding
procedure for booking the alternative course
I would greatly appreciate your assistance
Thank you in advance
Please contact me at your earliest convenience
Sincerely
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