you recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In you letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in good health and high spirits! I am writing

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letter to provide my feedback on the Indian Culinary

course

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, that I

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attended in your school ,

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month.

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was the best decision I have made, in the past few months. The

course

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was curated perfectly for a beginner like me and helped many novices improve their kitchen skills.

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, the knowledge that I have attained helped me to open a

resturant

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restaurant

in my hometown and it has become very famous for Chicken Butter Masala

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I have learned from your school.

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, I have started sharing

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knowledge

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poor people in my village , so that they can earn an income of their own.

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your

course

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is very popular in Delhi and has all the

neccessary

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necessary

cusines

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cuisine

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that represents Indian Culture, I would request you to start

culinary

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a culinary

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course

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other countries

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as Italian, Mexican , Australian etc.

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will encourage inclusivity among people. I would like to thank you for your efforts. Yours Sincerely, Shreyashi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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182 words

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