you recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In you letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and high spirits! I am writing

this

letter to provide my feedback on the Indian Culinary

course

, that I

have

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attended in your school ,

last

month.

This

was the best decision I have made, in the past few months. The

course

was curated perfectly for a beginner like me and helped many novices improve their kitchen skills.

Furthermore

, the knowledge that I have attained helped me to open a

resturant

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restaurant

in my hometown and it has become very famous for Chicken Butter Masala

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I have learned from your school.

Additionally

, I have started sharing

this

knowledge

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poor people in my village , so that they can earn an income of their own.

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your

course

is very popular in Delhi and has all the

neccessary

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necessary

cusines

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cuisine

business

that represents Indian Culture, I would request you to start

culinary

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course

of

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other countries

such

as Italian, Mexican , Australian etc.

This

will encourage inclusivity among people. I would like to thank you for your efforts. Yours Sincerely, Shreyashi