you recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In you letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
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I would like to thank you for your efforts.
Yours Sincerely,
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