You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Dear Mrs. Brown I am writing
letter regarding your web marketing seminar in Massachussets. My name is Karen and I am a Web Designer, I have been following your work for quite some time and learned a lot from it,
reason, I would like to have some specific information about the symposium since I want to be part of it. To start with, the advertisement on your website informs the season that the events will occur but not the dates, as I live in another country it would be amazing if you could provide the
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month and days of the seminar,
way I can program my trip in advance.
, I would like to know more about the activities that will be provided for the participants of the program. Equally important, I want to know more about the accommodation named in the post, if I opt for it, I will have to share the room with other people? The place is near
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the location where the event will happen?
, my
question is about the price, could you
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me the total cost of the program itself and
the cost if I choose to include the accommodation on the package? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Karen Agg
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