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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us
new
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 avenues
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 keeping
ourselves
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us
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 updated with the latest
news
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 and current affairs.
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, a fair amount of people believe, a conventional way of
newspaper
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 reading will be disappeared. I do not completely
accord
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agree
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 with it because a conventional
newspaper
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 is
an
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the
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 easiest and cheapest way to get
news
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. To embark on, there are multiple reasons why the traditional ways of getting
news
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 are still popular. First of all, reading
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newspaper
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the newspaper
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 has become the ardent habit of many people. Everyone whether from
affluent
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the affluent
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 or middle class
are
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 seen desperately waiting for paper in
morning
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the morning
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 and
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enjoying
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 it reading with a cup of tea.
Moreover
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, these are the
portable
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most portable
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, cheapest
an
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and
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 easiest
way
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ways
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 of knowing about
the
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apply
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global activities. It can be carried from one place to
other
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another
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 in
the
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a
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 bag and
available
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is available
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 at
economical
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an economical
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 price. It is so handy and merely by continuing
flip
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the flip
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 of pages can make you omniscient.
Secondly
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, electricity and other appliances are not required.
Moreover
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, the other attachments are like icing on the cake.
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, the Hindustan
times
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 has multiple attachments like women’s fashion, career guide, culinary art and so on.
However
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, undoubtedly, technology has given
the
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 radical approach to reading
news
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,
for example
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, videos provide a full and clear view
to
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of
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 reading
besides
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 that we can download, share and forward
it
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them
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 to our relatives and friends. Needless to say
that
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apply
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technophobic
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technophobia
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 will
be having
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have
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 no place in
this
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 ever-advanced modern world.
To conclude
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, the lives of people are drastically affected by advanced versions of technology yet, in my opinion, it will not be able to pose
threat
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a threat
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 to the existence of traditional
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 and magazines.

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