You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:  explain what you like about his new house  tell what you enjoyed most during your staying  Suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.

Hello Vikarant, How're you? I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and spirits. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I'm very impressed with your house because is very close to nature. Here I would like to express my thoughts to you.

Firstly

, I like the location and layout of the house, mainly the backyard area which is full of greenery and the fountain looks stunning.

along with

this

, it's decorated with different kinds of flowers which enhance the beauty of the place. Speaking of

this

, during my stay, I enjoyed my morning when doing meditation in the morning in your back garden.

Besides

this

, I liked the colourful fish which you have in your fountain pond. All in all, I will meet you on your special day

that is

coming soon. It's a good chance for us to spend quality time together. In the end, we will celebrate your birthday in a green place restaurant on 25 April which is well famous in your area. I hope you meet you soon. With regards, Dipak

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

179 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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