Some people think more public money should be spent on roads and motorways than public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I strongly, agree that public
money
should be spent on
roads
and motorways than public
transport
. There are so many benefits of spending many
in
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road
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the road
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than
transport
. There are so many
advanatages
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advantages
for
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building
roads
or improving
roads
. If the
government
will spend
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more on
roads
than
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then
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the public will
gets
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so
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many
advanatges
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advantages
. If the nation
will build
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builds
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new
roads
than
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then
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many
people
will get employment. As new
roads
will be there
than
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then
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it will
be
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even
benefited
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benefit
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in
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traveling from one place to another place.
For example
, if
roads
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the roads
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will be
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good
then
if a person i travelling from one city to another city
become
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becomes
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easy
as well as
fast for her. If the
government
will spend
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spends
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on public
transport
than
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then
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they have to spend too much but if they spend on
roads
than
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then
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by
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with
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that
money
they can build very good
quility
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quality
roads
for the
people
.
However
,
this
also
affect
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the economy because it
have
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so many
advanatages
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advantages
.
Thus
,
public
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should support the
government
in
improveing
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improving
roads
.
For instance
, good
quity
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quality
roads
improve
health
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the health
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of
a the
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nation. In the country USA
due to
improvment
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improvement
improvements
in
roads
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,roads
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the income of
people
have
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has
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also
increase
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. The
government
should even spend
money
on improving education, improving health, and many more.
People
should encourage the
government
to improve the
roads
.
To conclude
, more
money
should
be spend
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be spent
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on
roads
because that
have
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has
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more benefits
comapre
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compared
compare
to public
transport
.
Hence
, I strongly, agree that the
government
should build new
roads
or should improve
roads
.
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