The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
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The line graphs depict information about thefts per thousand private transport in four countries,
such
as Great Britain,
France
,
Canada
and Sweden measured in 10 periods between 1990 to 1999.
Overall
the United Kingdom had the highest points of robberies, staying on the same level until the end of the period,
while
the number of thefts in
France
and
Canada
totally decreased.
However
, Sweden had a negative tendency to the increasing number of burglaries year by year.
To begin
with, Great Britain in 1990 had 17 thefts per 1000 vehicles and maintained its peak at 20 in 1992, after, it fluctuated and
at the end
of the
last
period it stayed at the same point as in the beginning.
However
,
Canada
and
France
started at the same level as 6 and 8, respectively. Both decreased in the first 4 years,
nonetheless
,
France
had a slight rise and backed to the beginning level,
while
Canada
had a fluctuating period. Fortunately, both finished and decreased at the same point as 6.5 robberies.
On the other hand
, Sweden is the only country that had a significant increase, beginning with 8 stealing it doubled to 15 burglaries in 1999.
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