Nowadays, in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household chores equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In today's world, there is no discrimination against gender. People
work
equally without any problem as society's demands have increased. So, it is necessary to help each other in the family. Therefore
, Males should have to be equally responsible as females in getting household
work
done.
As mentioned before, women work
as same as men these days. Also
, people prefer living in nuclear families to a joint family. So, the workload in the house should also
be shared in two as both
work
the same hours
. For example
, if the wife is doing a day
shift and looking after a baby as well as
other household
chores, the husband should look for a day
shift to help his wife with babysitting. So, it can be fair to both
of them.
Apart from
this
, if a woman is helping financially and also
a breadwinner as her partner. She also
deserves equal hours
of rest to work
for the next day
. For example
, if the woman is working full hours
in the health care department. There is a more probability of her working 12 hours
a day
and because of this
, she only left with another 12 hours
. During these hours
, she has to manage all the housework and everything. There is no time left for her to rest. So, both
partners should share household
work
in half so both
can rest for the next day
.
In conclusion, in this
fast-changing lifestyle, men and women work
as same as each other to meet their financial needs. So, it should be better for them to share household
work
as well. By doing this
, they can have quality time together and no one will get disturbed by the burden.Submitted by jotpawan13 on
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