Your local council is planning to hold an election to choose members from the society but there are no young people on the council and you think that the council needs young people's views. You are thinking of standing for election. Write a letter to the head of the council. In your letter, state why you want to be elected mention why you think you would be a good candidate describe your qualities, skills, experience, interests, if any

Dear Sir, My name is Sushant Singh Dhillon, resident of Barnala District. I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my interest
to stand
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up as
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candidate in the local council election planned to be held in October 2023.
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I
belongs
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to
Dhillon
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the Dhillon
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family
who
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is well renowned for
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political history and it was my
grand
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father
's dream that he wanted to see me as a good leader because my
father
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not choose a political career for himself.
Therefore
,I wanted to be part of
this
council to fulfil the wish of my
grand
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father
. I will prove to be a good applicant because of the experience and knowledge my
grand
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father
shared with me. He has shared with me many facts and events which can help me to be a good leader.
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I have completed my graduation in political science and currently pursuing
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a masters
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masters
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in the same. I already have in-built leadership
quality
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. I have proved
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well in my college events where I have experience
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the
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various areas
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organising big occasions.
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, I am good at communication skills which
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to convince
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the third party. These
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abilities,
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are necessary for a member of a committee. Hope to receive a positive response from your side. Thanking you. Yours Faithfully, Sushant Singh Dhillon
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  • Civic engagement
  • Public service
  • Community projects
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Local businesses
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