some people think that success is mainly measured by how much money a person has. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
The global economic situation leads individuals to be more functional and make more
money
for a living. Thus
, people
may consider the amount of wealth as an important factor for success
. Although
this
attitude could be accurate somehow, I believe that there is more than one cause to call a person
"successful".
Nowadays, people
tend to make money
to improve their well-being. Following
this
, large amounts of income could provide more opportunities for a person
to benefit from a healthier body and mind. But people
with low earnings can endeavour to build a superior life
. For instance
, physical exercises such
as brisk walking, running, etc. are free and they cause an increase in the amounts of Dopamine in the brain that prevent mind and body illnesses. Hence
, achieving health, itself, is an important goal for humans and it is also
possible for poor people
to reach that and find a sense of fulfilment and success
in their lives.
Furthermore
, relationships are another factor of success
which people
are concerned about more than money
. Many people
who have established successful companies and now they are rich, suffer from a lack of close-knit relationships in their lives. For example
,if a wealthy person
needs urgent surgery, he or she probably chooses the most professional surgery and hospital but maybe this
person
spends the recovery period alone because he or she hasn't any close friends to ask them for aid. Being in a friendly relationship with people
is satisfactory due to
human being social and emotional needs. As a result
, having strong relationships is one of the keys to being successful in life
and it doesn't depend on how much money
you have but it relies on social skills.
In conclusion, the economy has considerably changed people
's attitudes towards life
and success
. A significant amount of individuals think money
is the most necessary aspect of their well-being and they evaluate themselves and others by a range of wealth. Whereas
,I believe success
has different meanings to anyone. So, people
may concentrate on other sides of life
and develop themselves in those ways to feel successful.Submitted by nikimohamadi72 on
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