Some people think that the goverment should provide free education at every level. However, some say individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although
some people
think that education
should be free for all levels, others believe that people
ought to pay for their university education
. In my opinion, I consider that all levels of education
must be paid for by the government in order to encourage people
to enter universities and to increase international students.
On the one hand, according to
some, the government should provide free education
at every level because everyone
will be encouraged to pursue their higher education
, and I agree. In other words
, poor people
, particularly will not be able to pay university fees, so if education
is available for free, people
will continue their tertiary education
without any problems, and the number of people
who are educated will increase. For example
, in Norway, the percentage of educated individuals keeps on increasing every year since education
in this
country
is free. Furthermore
, it is often claimed that free education
will increase the number of foreign students in a country
, so the language of the country
will be used internationally. This
certainly brings benefits to the country
.
On the other hand
, some may claim that individuals should pay for their tuition fees. One reason behind this
is that it is hard for the government to educate everyone
, especially if it is an underdeveloped or developing country
. That is
to say, to provide free education
, it involves a large amount of money. For instance
, some African countries cannot provide even food for their people
, so it is impossible for them to have free education
. Thus
, only developed countries can think about free education
. Another reason is that to have a perfect education
, educational institutions need funds to provide the best services and facilities.
To sum up
, while
people
may vary in their opinions. I think that education
should be free for everyone
because it is their right to be educated. If education
were available for everyone
without any payments, many nations would develop easily.Submitted by s_syedy on
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