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recently you saw an article in an newspaper journal about a city toen you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. how you know about this city town what information was incorrect what the editior should do about this.

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Dear Editor, I want to bring to your kind attention that you have printed a price of incorrect information in an article covering the origins of
Amravati
 city in
this
 September edition of Economic Times magazine. I spent most of my childhood in
Amravati
 which comes under Maharashtra and lived there for 25 years of my early life before moving to Pune. Since I was born in the city. I was always fascinated by the unique past and culture. past is my favourite subject in college I had to teach people about the past. your article is well-researched and beautifully penned,
however
, at the beginning of the second paragraph, information regarding the city's name traced to Europeans calling it
Amravati
 is incorrect.
According to
 the government record of oral history, people are known as "Amaravati", meaning "abode of the Deathless." I request you amend
this
 article and publish the correct information as it undermines the history of the
Amravati
 people fellow in Maharashtra. I hope you will immediately take corrective action and will update your story. Regards, Akanksha Tiwari.
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