The table illustrates the number of American households from 1790 to 1990.
The table illustrates the most five popular attractions in the USA regarding the numbers of visitors from 2004 and 2017.
Overall
, trump tower had the highest number of tourists
in both years. Its number surpassed by far the number of tourists
from the other attractions. On the other hand
, the least popular attraction was for
the Grand Canyon in 2004 and 2017.
Looking first at the most significant features, Change preposition
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trump
tower was the most visited attraction in the United States. It stood at 870 Correct article usage
the trump
thousand
of
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tourists
in 2004 and increased to 952 thousand
of
visitors in 2017. Followed by Disneyland which received 364 Change preposition
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thousand
of
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tourists
in 2004 and increase
slightly to 375 after thirteen years. Yellowstone Wrong verb form
increased
national park
, which had the fourth position on the list in 2004, after the Correct your spelling
National Park
golden gate bridge
increased marginally Correct your spelling
Golden Gate Bridge
up
to 252 Change preposition
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thousand
of
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tourists
.
In contrast
, the Grand Canyon only had 110 tourists
in 2014 and declined even more to 108 thousand
in 2017. Surprisingly, the golden gate bridge
witnessed the largest decline Correct your spelling
Golden Gate Bridge
from
the period from 301 Change preposition
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thousand
of
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tourists
to 234 tourists
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