Some people believe that children are responsible for their crimes and should be punished for them. Others think the parents are in charge and should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is debate about
children
's crime and some people
think that they should be punished for their behaviour. Others think that parents
are responsible for their child's crime and they should be punished instead
. I firmly support the second idea. I strongly believe that children
are innocent and punishment of children
due to
their behaviour is a completely unacceptable idea to me.
Parents
decide whether to have a child or not. Therefore
, they have to take care
of their children
. I believe that children
don't create problems, on the contrary
, parents
create a problem. Many scientific researches show that problematic behaviours among children
are directly related to their emotional gaps except from their parent's well-being situation. If parents
do not give and show their individual care
and emotional support to their kids, they will show some negative actions to gain their parent's attention.
Moreover
, children
do not have the capacity to judge in the correct manner, therefore
, their behaviours, in particular
, their crimes or bad habits are directly related to getting attention from them. Their only desire is to have enough respect and care
from their families. Due to
the fact that,
they cannot be punished Remove the comma
apply
due to
their activities. The problem is completely related to adults. I don't think that people
punish these poor children
in clear conscience under these truths. Otherwise
, It should be unfair to younger people
.
In conclusion, I think that negative behaviours should be treated in a correct manner and guidance. Psychological support and individual emotional care
should be given to these unlucky younger people
. Society should be focused on earning their potential, as a result
, punishment doesn't solve the case. Children
are the most beneficial gift for humanity.Submitted by nilufer.korkmaz on
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