You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: Explain your varied achievements over the past two years Express your interest in growing with the company Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Phillips,

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Dear Mr.Phillips, Good Day! I am writing

this

letter with regard to the upcoming annual appraisal. I would like to express my interest in getting a potential promotion as a team lead which I am eligible for

this

term after completing a successful two years.

Firstly

, I hope that I would be the best fit for

this

promotion since I have enabled a few significant

automations

Correct your spelling

automation

which resulted in time-saving and reduced manual workload. Adding to

this

, I have

also

onboarded two potential Big Four company clients to invest in our product which contributed around 40% of the profit to the company

this

year. Since I am passionate about my career in finance. I would like to nurture my knowledge towards Investment banking

along with

organizational growth. I have

also

enrolled in a course called Financial Analytics which would be useful to apply in my career. Having said that, I would like to discuss

this

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

196 words

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