Many argue that growing
and looking after pets should be among the activities that
do in primary school. I believe it has more benefits than downsides.
can learn to care for living things other than humans and
, they can gain a
of knowledge about
and
that might come in handy one day.
, some of the parents are afraid of the dangers that come with these tasks.
, to take care of a tree, or even a cat,
must do a
of research about them, what environment they need to prepare and
, what to feed them. So, they learn too much about
and
in general and it will help them in the future especially if they become a harvester or animal keeper.
, every step they take to know their
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better, reinforces the sense of caring for another being, in the child which
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pet owners' brain images, scientists have proven that their brain areas specific to caring and social part taking
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ordinary people.
, it is a great practice for
to look after other beings it teaches them a
.
, parents are really worried about the possible consequences these lessons will bring for
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and
usually live in the wild and so, to interact with them,
have to deal with a
of bacteria and microbes and
, they are more prone to get sick.
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age and because
are so kind and vulnerable, it might leave them heartbroken for the rest of their lives.
, I have heard stories about my cousin's childhood when he lost his dog. He was so attached to his dog that he became depressed and still after more than a decade, he sometimes remembers his late dog and gets sad.
, dealing with
and vegetables will
pose some threats to our physical and mental health.
, a
of parents disagree with the idea of their
having to take care of a pet or even a bush. But, I think the probability of getting sick from your own pet, if you take them to the
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regularly, is tiny and
, should not be of their concern.
, giving up on so many advantages
as gaining knowledge and becoming responsible, just for
small chance of getting sick, is wrong.