The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The data presented
by
the two pie charts depicts the Change preposition
in
energy
consumption and greenhouse
gas emissions
in an average family in Australia. In general, it is apparent that most of the energy
is utilized for heating and water
heating, while
water
heating and other appliances contribute the most to greenhouse
gas emissions
for an average household.
To commence, heating demands the most energy
in a household, accounting for 42% of the total consumption. It is followed by water
heating at 30%, which is double the amount of energy
use
for other appliances. The amount of Wrong verb form
used
energy
utilized for refrigeration, lighting and cooling each makes up a small minority of the total, at 7%, 4% and 2%, respectively.
Turning to the data on greenhouse
gas emissions
, the major source of emission comes from water
heating, which comprises approximately one-third of the total. Although
other appliances only occupy 15% of total energy
use, they produce the second-most amount of greenhouse
gases (28%). Although
heating is the most demanding for energy
use, it only contributes to 15% of total emissions
, which is roughly the same as that of refrigeration. The remaining 11% of the greenhouse
gases are emitted from lighting and cooling.Submitted by yoyoghurtxd on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, emissions, water with synonyms.
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