do you agree or dis agree with the following statement "a person should never make an important decision alone use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

PERSONAL STATEMENT My passion

in

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pursuing my

education

to

the

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higher level is mostly influenced by people, educational deficiency and the detrimental mindset of rural

neighbourhood

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towards

education

. I live in

a

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countryside where people work as

self-employee

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and

entrepreneur

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entrepreneurs

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. They believe that finance is the

primier

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primary

priority resulting

the

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idea that

education

is

not

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no

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longer important after graduating from junior high

schools

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. In fact, the impact of

this

negativism is in cities and

people

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surroundings. During my 2021 community service

program

in Benteng Paremba Village, Pinrang, I personally witnessed the educational inequalities between rural areas like Pinrang and urban

centers

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like Makassar in South Sulawesi.

This

is caused by unimplemented educational

policy

for all. Another one that I profoundly delved

was

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a junior high school dilemma. Take Sidrap,

nearby

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regency

as

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example, it is known that

this

regency is the city of scammer as more and more junior high school graduates end their

academics

earlier to take part in

this

crime. I observed that their drawbacks can be overcome by decent educational policies.

This

is the reason why I have

relentless

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goal to continue my

education

; and

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, and

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the PPSL

program

is my one step ahead to be enrolled in

graduate

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the graduate

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school of

education

policy

. Prior to my

bachelor

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graduation, I

have

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involved in numerous

activites

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activities

either in

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an english

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english

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academic context or

community-service

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community service

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volunteer. I do realize how essential

the

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english

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proficiency is, and

that is

the reason applying for the PPSL

program

is indeed beneficial for me. Not only can the

program

assist in my

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ability, but I

also

believe the

program

can assist me

for

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cross-cultural comprehension, international

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, professionalism, and

academics

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writing in deeper understanding. My commitment to apply

into

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several universities is based on background research in which the universities are available in the programme that I intend

in

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.

University

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of Melbourne is able to provide

Education

Policy

, International

Education

,

Policy

Analysis and

Program

Implementation

that

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can contribute to the belonging of my

academics

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goal. With their advanced facilities, infrastructures, fields of research and commitment to fostering a deep understanding of the

education

policy

. In conclusion, I am deeply committed to the BIB-PPSL

program

as the

program

aligns relevantly with my goals, and it offers a comprehensive curriculum in

english

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proficieny

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proficiency

proficient

(IELTS) and emphasizes international

academics

, which are crucial for me to proceed

my

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postgraduate. The University of Melbourne, renowned for its excellence in

education

policy

, provides an ideal academic environment for me to gain

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knowledge and skills.

So

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this

will overcome a problem like educational inequality gaps in my homeland (South Sulawesi) and will assist

to

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the greater good of

golden

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indonesia

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