ome people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

Competitive world, A child is spending more time at

school

and

school

activities

than at home with his/her parents.

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number of people believe that

community

service like charity, improving the neighbourhood and teaching

to

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younger kids should be a mandatory

part

of a

school

curriculum. I completely agree with

this

idea, as It develops and improves a

kid

's perspective about helping others and

community

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the community

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and the change they could make to

the

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apply

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society. It

also

develops

respect

to

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for

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every working group in

the

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apply

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society

there

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apply

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by nurturing

thier

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their

values and

personality

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personalities

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. When a

kid

participates in a charity event helping a family/neighbourhood in need. The

kid

is

being

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part

of the change and when he/she witnesses the change, it encourages them in future to be a

part

of good

thing

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things

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and that they could make a

difference

by doing something small. Having

such

experiences at an early age moulds a child's interest in participating in those

activities

as an adult.

For example

, the

school

I studied conducted a charity event where we all

create

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and

sell

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sold

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art. The money that we

earned

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are

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donated to an orphanage in our

community

. I was able to encounter the

difference

that made in the

the

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lifes

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of those kids, They were able to buy good clothes and books to study.

On the other hand

,

Community

services as a

part

of the

school

program

also

mandate every student to participate in multiple

activities

like cleaning the

community

or teaching the illiterate. These

activities

help an individual experience the hard work involved in those works and the impact they could create in day-to-day life.

This

develops

respect

toward those work groups like street

cleaner

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cleaners

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and janitors.

For instance

, I have seen people who don't

respect

the lower working groups like servers, cleaning staff and attendants, which is not normal. I feel,

community

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that community

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service being

part

of a

school

activity will make a huge

difference

and

helps

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help

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a

kid

to be a good human being. In conclusion , Mandating

community

service is

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a great

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great

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a great

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initiative by a

school

administration to help kids develop

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their

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his

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their

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personality which

make

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makes

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a

difference

to society and

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the people

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people

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the people

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around them by teaching them to

respect

and

helping

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help

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when ever

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whenever

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necessary .