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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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The digitalization of all aspects of today's society makes driving without a driver a possible thing. Many car vendors have researched and developed their technology to make
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 a feasible feature. It has somehow disagreed that
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vehicles
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 will take more benefits compared to 'normal'
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. Analysing how the judgment of the drivers cannot overtake the intelligence of the AI used in
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 the cost of automatic
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 will prove the point.
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, automatic
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 will be using AI in their system to overtake human intelligence systems in terms of driving. Despite AI being clever and smart, it is
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 prone to cyber-attacks and bugs, making it a double-edged sword.
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, there was an incident in China where
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 were overspeeding and managed to crash a bunch of people.
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it is clear that
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vehicles
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 are not very feasible to replace the existence of 'normal'
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.
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, the production of
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cars
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 will be much more expensive
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 the cost of research regarding their AI system.
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, the tax price people have to pay for buying single
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cars
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 will be enormously high. It is clearly not possible for those customers coming from a developed country who have relatively low income.
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, it adds to many reasons why
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cars
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 will not overtake 'normal'
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.
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, the community will buy products which are efficient and not pricey for them, which are the
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 they use nowadays. I disagree that
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cars
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 will completely replace the
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 used in daily life.
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, in the future, it is predicted that
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cars
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 will be used by most people in first-world countries
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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