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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has always been a controversial debate among people about whether verbal interaction is more influential than nonverbal interaction like writing or not. I personally believe that both of them have their own merits
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 different situations. There are quite a few reasons why oral
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 many advantages. First of all, it is
simpler
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 and faster way for people to express their
intention
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 clearly and impact
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parties in an effective way by using some important factors that contribute to
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 expressions, gestures, and intonation.
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, in
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 modern world, high-tech devices and applications have provided us with
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 experience
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 on a video call through online platforms despite long distances. Another reason is that it can help us deter
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misunderstanding.
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 in a formal meeting, individuals may face
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some vague issues
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which they can easily address
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by asking some questions.
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, the pros of written
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 undeniable.
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 type of
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 is more formal and can be used as evidence in legal contexts.
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, in companies, staff usually prepare official reports on their work. If something illegal happens, these records can be a proof in court.
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, written interaction plays a significant role in being references in scientific fields. Ideas and hypotheses after conducting required experiments and carrying out in-depth analyses will be turned into referable papers. Scientists and students can refer
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 treasure sources and utilize them to develop their research. In conclusion, for the reasons cited above, I argue that both spoken
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 and written
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 are instrumental in our
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taking each
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 circumstances into consideration.
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