In the feature all cars,busesand trucks will be driverless.the only people travelling inside these vechicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vechicles outweight the disadvantages?

The given topic is the feature cars,buses and trucks will be driverless.only passengers are
travelelling
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travelling
inside these
vechicles
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vehicles
. From an
overall
view,it can be seen that feature
vechicles
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vehicles
will go without drivers
both
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for both
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public
or
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and
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private
transports
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transport
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.
This
is totally
disadvantageou
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disadvantageous
disadvantage
disadvantages
,
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because all
type
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types
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of
vechicles
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vehicles
must have trainers in any situation.Another thing is we do not have
this
type of
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technology
For example
, Tesla car companies have
this
much
of
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technology
that is
artificial
intellegent
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intelligence
intelligent
.Some of the time, it faced major accidents reason
algorithm
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the algorithm
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did not work properly.So we need to improve our AI machines but these
type
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of AI
the
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improvements will really
danger
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threaten
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our
life
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lives
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, because
it
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they
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will be plucking our
job
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jobs
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,so we will face joblessness time as soon as possible. AI development is necessary but only
few
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a few
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work
that is
which work will not
do
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be done
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by humans,But cars and buses
is really need
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human talent and their ability.In some critical
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situations
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situation
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humans are able to handle the problem properly
comparing
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to automatic
system
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systems
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.There are
lot
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of
driver
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drivers
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are
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working all over the world,so it will help financially and they will live without panic.In my suggestion people do not want
this
catagery
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category
technology,Reason
this
is unrequirement,
it
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will give way
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to people
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people
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laziness and they will not grow driving talent.
This
is so important because it is a unique power for some
persons
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people
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especially
who
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those who
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are
driver
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drivers
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,passengers
are really feel
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really feel
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more comfortable when the vehicles
will be
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are
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driven by the proper driver.we will not predict when the
vechicles
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vehicles
are
driving
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driven
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by AI.
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