In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, everyone
are
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going to read
newspapers
and
books
online and they will not buy printed ones,
wich
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i
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totally agree with and
i
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am going to explain my reasons in
this
essay. There are two main benefits
for
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this
topic.
Firstly
, electronic
books
are so much cheaper than paper
books
and
newspapers
are free online and it is a lot easier to access them.
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, you can read
newspapers
everyday
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by just searching for them on the internet and you can
also
find any book you want online and it is so much faster than searching for them in every bookstore.
Moreover
, cutting trees and harming
the
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nature
for
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producing paper is
realy
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really
damaging our planet these days, developing online
books
and
newspapers
and replacing them can reduce the amount of cutting trees and usage of paper. In my opinion, in
this
way
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people would be more comfortable reading
books
and
the
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nature would get harmed less than before.
Additionally
, more individuals will start reading
books
. Because
,
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it is faster for them to find the book and they
also
can have it for a lower price. The people who were not used to
read
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books
in the past will get used to reading and people who did not have enough money to buy
books
,
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will be able to buy whatever they like. The citizens who did not have time to follow the news can
also
search for the
newspapers
due to
the capability of online news websites. In
coclusion
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conclusion
, it is good news that everybody will read
books
and
newspapers
online and
fortunatelly
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fortunately
unfortunately
it is happening.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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