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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays with the advances in technology, people would rather live in
cities
instead
 of the countryside.
Hence
, the population in
cities
 has risen and it has fallen in the rural areas. I believe it is a negative development
due to
 the increasing air pollution in big
cities
 and growing the average age of the small towns which can cause more gaps in facilities between them and
cities
 in the next years.
To begin
 with, most of the capital
cities
 around the world struggle with air pollution. Increasing the number of cars and the amount of industries' production has led over-crowded
cities
 to face a major crisis.
Moreover
, individuals have to be stuck in huge traffic congestions every day to go to their workplace. It is crystal clear that these
cities
 are not constructed for
this
 number of people and expensive reconstructions and developments are required to adapt them to
this
 crowd.
For example
, governments allocate a huge amount of budget every year to expand the subway and increase the number of buses around the town to accommodate residents.
In addition
 to
this
, by immigrating youngsters to
cities
, the average age of the small towns increases and providing appropriate healthcare for them would be a challenge. On the grounds that most immigrants are the younger ones who have the ambition to find a new career and greater job opportunities in
cities
, the difference in available facilities provided by professionals between
cities
 and the suburbs will be more and more till these places are not suitable to live anymore.
To conclude
, based on the recent development of big
cities
, individuals move from the countryside to these places looking for a career. In my opinion,
this
 trend results in more air pollution in the big
cities
 and
also
 less development of technologies and facilities in the countryside.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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