You need to take leave from your work for over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter: -explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need -explain how you will keep up-to-date while you're away -suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Mr Smith, I am Tajinder Singh, marketing manager in the head branch of your company and am writing
this
letter to approve my request for leave of 2 months from February 29, 2024,
due to
some personal reasons. To commence with, let me explain the reasons for
this
request, the prominent one is my sister's marriage which is going to be held on March 20, 2024. Apart from that,
this
marriage got fixed in a hurry
due to
the request of Broom's family.
Although
my parents can organize these events on their own, I still want to be a part of
this
function and assist them as it is my moral duty to help them.
Additionally
, I will stay updated about every project through the online login account of the firm.
Also
, I can work on weekends to do my part of the work on my laptop and my assistant can perform remaining duties during my absence here. I hope you
would
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understand my situation and please give
this
matter urgent attention. I look forward to meeting you again soon. Yours sincerely, Tajinder Singh
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea to streamline the letter's structure. While the letter is generally well-organized, more distinct separation of ideas can enhance clarity.
task achievement
Try to provide more detailed plans on how your work will be covered, including specific responsibilities your assistant will take over, to strengthen the letter's task response.
suitable writing tone
The letter appropriately addresses its purpose and audience but could improve by adding a more personal touch or expressing gratitude for the understanding and support expected from the employer.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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