In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?
The caretakers of elderly individuals are often overworked and feel they are neglecting their duties. In my opinion,
this
hurts quality
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the quality
care
and the best solution is comprehensive, societal reform.
The main issues resulting from (a) lack of time to look after the elderly have to do with poor care
. A nurse with several patients to visit, who might all require around the clock
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around-the-clock
care
, must prioritise. The neglected patients are then
more likely to develop bed sores, poor nutrition, and depression. In more extreme situations, patients with dementia or life-threatening conditions for
example, there may be serious injury. An Alzheimer’s patient may wander out of the house, get lost and not be able to find their way home. A critically ill patient may need urgent Add the comma(s)
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care
and not be able to contact the hospital in an emergency.
These problems can be partly remedied if society felt
responsible for the elderly. There are examples of nations like Japan, where old people are highly respected. Wrong verb form
feels
This
permeates all levels of society and translates to children and grandchildren being more willing to take on the burden of care
, as well as
more attentive doctors and better government-funded social programs. All these measures combined not only have a tangible, daily impact but also
shift the societal mindset from considering the elderly a nuisance to regarding them as a milestone in life that all must pass through, deserving of respect.
In conclusion, the problems related to limited opportunities for looking after the elderly concern their level of care
and can be combatted with a number of measures permeating multiple layers of society. Though unlikely, these reforms would evidence a core of human compassion.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...