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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems to increase the costs of fuels. Do you agree or disagree?

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The given line graph provides information for the percentage of changes in prices of three metals in comparison with
previous
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 month over the months of 2014.
Overall
, during
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 year
Nickel
 saw the biggest change and
Copper
 experienced the lowest change. In the first month, the average price of
Nickel
 increased by 6% compared with
previous
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 month,
while
Zinc
 and
Copper
 saw a slight growth of 1% and 2%, respectively. From January to May, all three metals increased moderately, after which they saw a fall of 3% in
Nickel
 and about 1%
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Zinc
 and
Copper
. Between July and September, the changes
remined
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remained
 constant in all metals.
In particular
, Both
Nickel
 and
Zinc
 decreased
of
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 about 1% and
Copper
 went up by 1% monthly. In October, trends of changes were constant,
however
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 over the next 2 months, their prices increased again (
Nickel
 and
Copper
 increased by about 1% and
Zinc
 saw a rise of about 2%).
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