The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The graph illustrates the number of people travelling to a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. The unit is measured in millions.
Overall
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, it is obvious that the Caribbean island’s total sum of guests increased over the course of 7 years, hitting 3.5
million
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. Despite the tourists preferred staying on the land at the beginning of the report, there was a shift and
at the end
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of the analysis, they were fancy to live on the cruise ships
instead
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. Focusing on the incomers staying on board, the amount of visitors doubled after a year from 0.25
million
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in 2010 to 0.5
million
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in 2011.
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, there was a significant plummet in 2012 back to its initial rate in 2010. After the dramatic plunge in 2012, the number of visitors living onboard gradually rose over the period to 2
million
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tourists in 2017 which surpassed the number of people staying on the land. Moving on to the incomers staying on the island, it started with nearly 0.75
million
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tourists in 2010 and moderately surged until 2013, hitting its all-time high of 1.5
million
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visitors.
Thereafter
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, the trend flattened out over the period of 2013 to 2015.
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there was a small drop of 0.25
million
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in 2016, it went back to its retained rate of 1.5
million
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incomers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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