The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The chart compares the average house
prices
of various countries in 1989 with the periods of 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002.
Overall
, the average prices
for the period
of 1990 to 1995 decreased for New york
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York
Tokyo
and London compared to 1989 while
Madrid and Frankfurt increased. For the period
of 1996 to 2002, most of the cities' house price
rose except for Fix the agreement mistake
prices
Tokyo
.
London and Tokyo
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dropped for
around 7% in Change preposition
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1990
to 1995 Correct article usage
the 1990
period
compared to 1989. It is also
the highest decline amongst all other countries and periods. Frankfurt on the other hands
recorded the most increase in housing Fix the agreement mistake
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prices
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rose
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compare
to 1989.
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period
of 1996 - 2002 . London have
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7
% decrease to more than Correct article usage
a 7
12
% increase which is Correct article usage
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the highest amongst all other cities and periods. All other countries have recorded an increase in housing price
in the Fix the agreement mistake
prices
period
of 1996 to 2002 except for Tokyo
which have
recorded a 5% decline in housing Unnecessary verb
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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