The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below shows changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The chart compares the average house
prices
of various countries in 1989 with the periods of 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002.
Overall
, the average
prices
for the
period
of 1990 to 1995 decreased for New
york
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York
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,
Tokyo
and London compared to 1989
while
Madrid and Frankfurt increased. For the
period
of 1996 to 2002, most of the cities' house
price
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prices
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rose except for
Tokyo
. London and
Tokyo
's real estate
prices
dropped
for
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by
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around 7% in
1990
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the 1990
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to 1995
period
compared to 1989. It is
also
the highest decline amongst all other countries and periods. Frankfurt on the other
hands
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hand
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recorded the most increase in housing
prices
in that
period
with more than
3
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a 3
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%
rose
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rise
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compare
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compared
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to 1989. For the
period
of 1996 - 2002 . London
have
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turns
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turned
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sharply from
7
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a 7
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% decrease to more than
12
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a 12
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% increase which is
also
the highest amongst all other cities and periods. All other countries have recorded an increase in housing
price
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prices
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in the
period
of 1996 to 2002 except for
Tokyo
which
have
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apply
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recorded a 5% decline in housing
price
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prices
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compare
Wrong verb form
compared
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to 1989.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, period, tokyo with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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