The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual ’ income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The presented bar chart illustrates the figures of households in terms of five separate ranges of annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, all the sectors did not experience a significant change through these 8 years. Moreover
, surprisingly, employees with 75000 to 99999 dollars had the lowest number of houses
in the 3 reported years.
According to
the bar chart, the group with the highest wage started the period in the region of 29 million
houses
and after a trifling decrease in 2011, they experienced a 7 million
rise to 33 million
in 2015. Moreover
, individuals with 25 to 49999 hundred dollars yearly income were the second most households at the beginning of the period with 26 million
. Fascinatingly, they bought 6 million
houses
in the next 4 years and overtook the first place however
they had a minor decrease by 2 million
and lost their place at the end
.
In addition
to this
, the 2 lowest income sectors had the same pattern and they started with 25 and 27 million
houses
and they finished at 27 and 28 million
respectively. On the other hand
, the second group in terms of annual salary were the lowest householders and their figure was in the range of 14 to 15 million
houses
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