Some say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
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the growth of technology, Linking Words
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accessibility and quality have boosted and everyone can Use synonyms
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the Use synonyms
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to stay Use synonyms
connect
with their Change the form of the verb
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friends
and family and Use synonyms
this
is making it easier for Linking Words
individuals
to communicate with each other. In my opinion, I completely agree with Use synonyms
this
statement because the advantages of Linking Words
this
phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages.
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in
the advancement of the Change preposition
to
Internet
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, in the past Linking Words
people
just could Use synonyms
use
letters to send their photos or messages to their relatives and Use synonyms
friends
that took a long time to deliver or they just could speak to each other on the phone. Use synonyms
However
, with the growth of technology, nowadays, Linking Words
individuals
can Use synonyms
use
smartphones and the Use synonyms
Internet
to send any kind of message namely, video messages, voice messages and text in a minute. Use synonyms
Secondly
, in the Linking Words
past
it was hard for Add a comma
,past
individuals
to connect with professionals and communicate with them, Use synonyms
while
in today's world with the Linking Words
internet
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people
can Use synonyms
use
some applications like Linkedin or Instagram to expand their network or follow expertise in any fields they want to update their knowledge. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the Linking Words
interent
has some great impacts on Correct your spelling
Internet
people
's lives.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
internet
has some disadvantages. One of the most important drawbacks is Use synonyms
individuals
get addicted to the Use synonyms
internet
and they cannot live without it. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
individuals
especially young children prefer to Use synonyms
use
online games or chat with their Use synonyms
friends
rather than do physical activity or make new Use synonyms
friends
in schools or parks. In the long Use synonyms
term
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,term
this
phenomenon may have negative effects on their lives Linking Words
such
as isolation and obesity which cause depression and heart disease for them.
In conclusion, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
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may have some negative impacts on Correct your spelling
Internet
individuals
' life Use synonyms
such
as isolation and obesity, there are many benefits that Linking Words
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people
's life easier Use synonyms
such
as expanding networks and staying in touch with Linking Words
friends
and relatives that time and place do not matter. In my point of view, I completely agree that the Use synonyms
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