Some say that the Internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

It is true that

due to

the growth of technology,

internet

accessibility and quality have boosted and everyone can

use

the

internet

to stay

connect

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with their

friends

and family and

this

is making it easier for

individuals

to communicate with each other. In my opinion, I completely agree with

this

statement because the advantages of

this

phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, there are several advantages

in

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the advancement of the

Internet

.

Firstly

, in the past

people

just could

use

letters to send their photos or messages to their relatives and

friends

that took a long time to deliver or they just could speak to each other on the phone.

However

, with the growth of technology, nowadays,

individuals

can

use

smartphones and the

Internet

to send any kind of message namely, video messages, voice messages and text in a minute.

Secondly

, in the

past

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it was hard for

individuals

to connect with professionals and communicate with them,

while

in today's world with the

internet

people

can

use

some applications like Linkedin or Instagram to expand their network or follow expertise in any fields they want to update their knowledge.

Therefore

, the

interent

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Internet

has some great impacts on

people

's lives.

On the other hand

, the

internet

has some disadvantages. One of the most important drawbacks is

individuals

get addicted to the

internet

and they cannot live without it.

Moreover

,

individuals

especially young children prefer to

use

online games or chat with their

friends

rather than do physical activity or make new

friends

in schools or parks. In the long

term

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this

phenomenon may have negative effects on their lives

such

as isolation and obesity which cause depression and heart disease for them. In conclusion,

while

the

interent

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Internet

may have some negative impacts on

individuals

' life

such

as isolation and obesity, there are many benefits that

makes

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people

's life easier

such

as expanding networks and staying in touch with

friends

and relatives that time and place do not matter. In my point of view, I completely agree that the

internet

is making

individuals

'

life

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easier.